No, I’m not talking about kindergarten class. I’m talking about that most common piece of writing advice: Show, don’t tell. I have found some writers, however, take that too literally and believe everything must be shown, to the detriment of their stories. So, I prefer to call it show and tell. I am going to rely in part on an essay by Anna Keesey titled “Making a Scene,” which I found in The … [Read more...]

The most comprehensive book on writing that I own is Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft by Janet Burroway. I started thumbing through it the other day, looking for what Burroway had to say about how to begin a book. I didn’t find exactly what I was looking for. Rather, I found a discussion on conflict that approached it from an intriguing aspect. The traditional narrative arc of a … [Read more...]

Back when I was in my twenties and living in New York, a favorite conversation starter among my friends was: If the apocalypse happened tomorrow, what three books would you save? My first two were easy—the dictionary (preferably Webster’s) and the collected works of Shakespeare. (Size was not a consideration.) Having put in my vote for those two, I let others argue about books on farming and … [Read more...]

I overwrite at times. I don’t mean long phrase-upon-phrase, clause-upon-clause, description-upon-description sentences as, say, Virginia Woolf does. If I were capable of writing sentences like this from Mrs. Dalloway— The British middle classes sitting sideways on the tops of omnibuses with parcels and umbrellas, yes, even furs on a day like this, were, she thought, more ridiculous, more unlike … [Read more...]

I wrote a post a few months ago about how a children’s movie used an important plotting technique—that is, when a protagonist solves one problem, she or he should be confronted by a worse problem. Now advice from a documentary filmmaker, whose mother is a student of mine. Ginny was frustrated with the plotting of her latest novel, so her son told her he’d read it and see if he had any … [Read more...]